http://slow.writerscafe.org/Nighteyes5678 The original writings of author Nighteyes en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776071535 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is an experimental piece with a working title. If you have any advice or comments, criticism or thoughts, then please let me know. I don't care if it's negative as long as it's helpful. Also? I need a better title. Ideas? Thanks! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Nighteyes5678/228439/