http://slow.writerscafe.org/BTMartinson The original writings of author Benjamin Martinson en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776075842 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 The material is necessary for the story, but I'm not sure about the pacing. Feel free to leave comments. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/BTMartinson/296196/ Chapter 2The fallAs man multiplied in number he created discord between his brothers, which led to a hatred so deep that man wished to be rid of other brethren, so the gods took away man’s immortality.  A fight broke out between Tane and Narayan; Narayan died, so the gods took him to .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/BTMartinson/283223/ This is the first chapter of my fantasy novel. I have done some more editing. Comments are welcome. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/BTMartinson/268814/ A fantasy novel about a young cadet struggling with the way he was raised and the changing ways of the empire. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/BTMartinson/268809/ An old poem. It's different from what I am writing now. Personally, I love and hate it at the same time. It doesn't rhyme, but the idea is good. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/BTMartinson/268271/