http://slow.writerscafe.org/2muchturkey The original writings of author Sam I Am en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776891237 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 this is only the first part of my short story; please critique with honesty! (It's also a rough draft, so I'm sure there are pleanty of grammatical errors) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/2muchturkey/392517/ A short story of an odd boy who comes across a valuable treasure, changing his life forever; please let me know if it is worth finishing or not! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/2muchturkey/351567/ My father was a depressed man, and liquor was his poisen. It's funny the memories that a child holds onto- the strong smell of my mother's prefume; the whimsical tales of Peter Rabbit I would demand she read before I was made to go to sleep. These are the very small, yet significant details tha.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/2muchturkey/351352/ Sweet, warm breeze of summerkiss her curly locks of gold,caress her rosy cheeks.Now, blow me your married vaporsSo that I may feel her presence,And breath in her precious fragrancefar sweeter than your own. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/2muchturkey/350320/ My teacher in highschool always told me that grammar was more important than content. This is an odd poem that illustrates that point. Some may get it, others will not; but that's ok, I had fun writing it! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/2muchturkey/350285/