http://slow.writerscafe.org/DoublePhrase The original writings of author Shanice Williams en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776271871 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is my first major piece of writing that i have attempted, just a draft of the first chapter of this novel. constructive critisism will be appreciated greatly. thanks for the support! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/DoublePhrase/356868/