http://slow.writerscafe.org/donhaller The original writings of author Don Haller en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776048175 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Issue 1 will start with Liz being possessed by Vicious. After that, there will be an ongoing inner dialog with the two as Liz (and the reader) learns about what it means to be possessed by a succubus. One basic underlying principle is that Vicious will become stronger as she feeds more. The two char.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/donhaller/499926/ http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/donhaller/499882/ Page 7Panel 1 (1/3 page, top)Panel is black. Liz’s eyes are slits in the center. They are blue, tired looking. Panel 2 (1/3 page, center)POV is looking out of the corner. Man 1 is front and center silhouette. Alley walls and Man 2 are in the background.  Man 1 looks over .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/donhaller/499144/ Page 3Panel 1Liz is walking down a city street. She has a duffel bag slung over her shoulder. She is dressed differently than in the previous scene. Panel 2A man stands at the entrance to an alley. He is tall and lanky, with long black hair.Man 1 (Speech bubble)Hey Baby, Ya lookin.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/donhaller/497797/ Page 1Panel 1 (Half page)Liz is sitting on a bench in a park. There are trees in the back round and a breeze is blowing. Liz (Text box)Why me? Panel 2 (1/4 page)Pan slightly upward and to the left of original view. The area around the park comes into view. There are brick w.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/donhaller/497736/ The main character is loosely based on the Countess Elizabeth Bathory. This is definitely not for the squeamish. If you are easily offended, please don't read. Some of the more sadistic aspects of the piece are factual acounts of her crimes. You've been http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/donhaller/361760/ http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/donhaller/361758/