http://slow.writerscafe.org/baldyorc The original writings of author mac1 en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775277598 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15  THE LOSS OF HONOUR  The three, smoke blackened figures fell through the fire damaged iron bound door, and laid in the door way of the cellars outside exit. Greedily gasping the warm semi fresh air which was full of smoke which was still rising from the surrounding smouldering .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/baldyorc/372727/ this is one the first ones i have written. it was done for competition on a wargaming website i am active for. its not perfect, also i need to practise my grammar more lols. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/baldyorc/372724/