http://slow.writerscafe.org/melonontheloose The original writings of author Lolo K en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776348951 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 not even i know whats going on here yet http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/398200/ this is actually a rewrite of something i did in seventh grade. i can really write a description here because im just making it up as i go http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/398199/ again you see Lisey and Daniel getting closer and closer but more as friends, whereas Lauren and Austin are portrayed here more as a match, soulmates http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387505/ Chapter 21The “Lair” “Kade?!”  Lisey gasped as she ran to him.  Lauren split to check on Shawn and Vince.“Kade?” Lisey grabbed his shoulder and his eyes shot open.“Lisey?  What are you doing here?“Lauren and I are on yea.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387495/ Chapter 20Finally Taken “Is Vince coming?”  Whinny asked as they ran into Westland Public School.“I don’t know.  He didn’t say anything.”“Well what would he do?”“Do you remember how strong he is?”“Well yea.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387493/ Chapter 19The New Comrades Kade sighed.  “Let’s go.”  He jumped up.“Where?”  Whinny asked. “I dunno. Anywhere but this Starbucks.  We do this too much.  Even somewhere in the bookstore!  There’s three floors .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387492/ this is where Spencer comes back http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387491/ Chapter 17Two Saviors, Two Great Guys Three weeks later, Whinny had been out of the hospital for two weeks and three days.  Viggo’s and Whinny’s aunt and uncle were still missing.“Viggo!”  Whinny called from her room.  Her big brother came and lead.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387490/ Chapter 16Invisible Savior “Kade get down here!”  It was the first thing Kade heard when he answered his cell phone.“Vince, what’s up?”“Man, it’s Whinny.”“Whinny?!”“Yeah, this morning around three, her house ca.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387488/ in here, you can see more of Whinny and Viggos relationship and how theyre handling it, and the support htey have, i think this is kind of cute http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387487/ this is one of the more epic scenes. Theres a chase scene and you learn a little bit more about the man http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387486/ okay so you meet Reece in this chapter then within the next two or three he disapears, thats cuz hes gunna come back into the sequal http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387485/  Chapter 11Into the Mind Two weeks of pleading for training droned on.  The rumor Spencer set, had faded out rather quickly, and the group hadn’t seen the man, since the day of the discovery.  Spencer was almost officially knocked out of the group and Kade had dragg.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387483/ Chapter 10Kade’s Irresistible Convincing Whinny shut her locker door and turned to see Kade standing right in front of her.  He was so close she took a step back and backed into her locker.  “Didn’t mean to scare you.” He smiled, again, showing off his .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387482/ Chapter 9Training “Are you sure?” Viggo asked.  “Because we were all thinking that.”  Spencer shot him a glare.“Okay then, we’ll demonstrate.”Whinny drew her eyes to Kade’s and then blushed.  “Yeah, my eyes are very .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387481/ Chapter 8New Discovery “I still can’t believe you didn’t tell us!”  Spencer announced for the fourth time.“Just shut up and give it a rest.  She’s scared.”  Kade demanded.“Excuse me?!”“You heard me.  Or .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387480/ Chapter 7Unveiled Truth “I knew I could test you.” He grinned at Whinny.  Kade helped Spencer up.“What are you talking about?”  Vince finally made himself noticed.“She saw it.”“Stop! Don’t come any closer.”The man put.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387479/ this is where the story really starts to begin http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387478/ this is something that goes inbetween chapters :P http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387477/ Chapter 5Viggo and Whinny, the Kindhearted Viggo and Whinny waved to people as they both entered the building.  They weren’t the most popular at school, but they were liked.  “Hey, Maddi, are you okay?” Viggo asked as the two stopped by a girl hugging herself... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387475/ Chapter 4Spencer the Judgmental “Spence! Time to go!  Your bus is here!”Ten years ago, when Spencer was eight years old, a save-the-whales, go-hug-a-tree, kind of guy in his twenties, thought he’d do the world a favor, and adopt a little kid.  Spencer was tha.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387474/ Chapter 3Kade the IndecisiveKade flipped open his cell phone and dialed Viggo’s number.  “Hello?”“Hey Viggo.  Do you know when we’re doing that physics project?”“Yeah, we were planning for it to be after school today… why?  Pl.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387473/ Chapter 2Shawn the Girly Shawn finished fingering through her curls, and then moved on to make up.  When she finished at the mirror, she moved to the closet.  Just then, Maddi called. Shawn picked up the phone, and fell onto her bed. “Hey girl.” “Hey, OMG, .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387472/ Chapter 1Vince the Enduring The lights were on in the house.  Great.  Once again, Vince had broken curfew.   Dreading the lecture he’d receive, Vince put his rip stick in the garage and slowly made his way inside.Vince’s dad jumped at the sound of the doo.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387468/ im not noramally a sci-fi kinda person but i had a great idea for this book and its really really really hard to describe but some have abilities and i tried my best not to make it sound all cheesy and weird so i think i did an okay job, the beginnings n http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387466/ you can see here that Daniel trusts Lisey and the other way around. You can see their relationship forming farther, and same as Austin and Lauren http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387448/ Here you can see how Sam really likes Lauren but shes stolen away by one glace from Austin. This is also where you can see the relationship between Daniel and Lisey forming http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387445/ we flash from Austin to Jamie to Lauren. I like this particular scene because you can see more of Austin's and Lauren's relationship forming. It also shows you how close Lauren and Daniel are http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387443/ Its a really short chapter but its just describing the crash scene http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387440/ this is the last scene of happiness and pure carefree bliss before the crash so you know what a transition it would be. More of Austin and Lauren http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387439/ okay so this cahpter kind of describes how the group is so tight, they love to play around with each other but they really do care, and its also the start of Austin and Lauren http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387437/ this is where you see relationships starting to form and also the tention between the guys http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387435/ these two chapters are still describing their simple lives of happiness, just trying to engrane in your mind a simple picture of a group of carefree friends that dont have anything to worry about yet. It also give you a little insight to Sams character http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387434/ this is another short chapter where it just shows how the characters are living a good life in bliss and how theyve got it pretty good, the girls are normal, giggly girls and the guys are the regular emotionless guys (no offense guys :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387432/ this is really short, just telling the readers a little more on Laurens personality http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387430/ alright to so this chapter just describes the characters and their personalities, so its a lil boring http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387427/ this is a more epic scene where Jake saves Aria's life http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387258/ more of the beginning than the prolouge http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387255/  Irene Kassorla once said, “You must have control of the authorship of your own destiny.  The pen that writes you life story must be held in your own hand.”                &nbs.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387254/ romace i have no idea what im doing yet or where im going with this, but i had a dream and i wanna make it a book http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387250/ a group of friends get stranded on an island. Now, despite their differences, competition, and personalities, relationships will be destroyed, some will be made, some will be lost forever. Just as they're being pulled apart, they have to pull together t http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/melonontheloose/387248/