http://slow.writerscafe.org/awesomeness922x The original writings of author ~AmateurWriter en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776057389 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Chapter 8 �" VizI laid on my bed and just stared at the ceiling for whatseemed like forever. Hours must have passed, the sun went down but Imade no move to get up. I still didn't hear my mom get home. Imust've fallen asleep after a while because I woke up in my clothes,.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/793135/ Chapter 7 �" EliThe day started off like any other, aside from thenervousness I was feeling in having to see Viz and Jake at school.When I walked into school that day, I felt like everyone's eyes wereon me, like they knew what I'd done with Viz the day before. Ofcours.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/793134/ Chapter 6 �" VizWhen he left, I wondered where we stood. Were we now anitem? Neither of us were out yet, so where did that leave ourrelationship? Did he want to have a relationship that was a secret?Did he even want a relationship with me, or did he just want to stayf.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/793133/ Chapter5 �" EliAs soon as Viz was gone, Jake sat down next to me andlooked at me with a serious face. “Can we talk? Privately,” heasked.I studied his face, wondering what he was thinking andthen agreed and walked up to my room with him. As soon of the door.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/793132/ Chapter4 " VizThe sun shone through my blinds and turned my vision redthrough my eyelids. I rolled over and pulled my blanket over my faceto block the imposing light. It was Saturday but I knew I had to getup sometime so I reluctantly rolled out of bed and slipped somesweatpants on.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/759017/ Chapter3 �" EliThe next six days were made up of school and filmingwith Viz. We spent that whole week filming my part of the project andworking on homework together and getting to know each other. Itwasn't a lot of time but I think Viz learned more about me in thatweek .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/759016/ Chapter2 �" VizThe first day of school had started out beinguneventful. I was starting the eleventh grade, at a new school, in anew town and I'd already decided my fate�"I was going to be a loser,like always. Maybe I'd even be considered a freak, especiallyc.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/759012/ Chapter 1 �" Eli“Elijah,would you please stop ogling yourself in the mirror? You're gonna belate and we have to wait for you for some dumb reason,” my annoyingolder sister, Tabby, called. I watched my reflection scowl. I hatedwhen she called me by my full name.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/awesomeness922x/759010/ Eli Cole and Viz McCoy couldn't be more different, yet they find that they are one in the same. 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