http://slow.writerscafe.org/Inperfect The original writings of author Inperfect en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776011596 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is a section of a book that I have started writing, im really putting this up just to see how people feel about the emotion in the scenes. So please feel free to comment and advise http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Inperfect/1154045/ This is my first attempt at writing a story that has been in my head for a long time now, actually this is my first attempt at writing anything really. So I'm just looking for help and advice really. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Inperfect/1152938/