http://slow.writerscafe.org/zfsallman The original writings of author Zebra en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776015424 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This poem is actually about missing someone, for which the setting sun is a metaphor. If you could give me feedback i would appreciate it very very much! I also feel as if it's not finished. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/1388403/ “Once” Once, there was a girlA girl who ignored the unrelenting staresOf those who could not comprehendThe stares that followed her as she walked with her family Once, there was a girlA girl who felt uprooted from what she had always knownAnd put in a place where .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/565700/ Finsished? or unfinished? is it atleast not crappy? lollll need help with this one, thanks! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/565697/ Hopelessness comes to this spiritWIshing that this had never happenedWhy did you have to disturb my peace?Now everything is just ephemeral,There is no lasting love, nor happinessEverything was as it should be,Until you came and ruined it all. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/565696/ any ideas to add onto this? or is it finished? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/565694/ “Dials and Tribulations”I told him not to buy itIt looked like a flimsy, cheap old thing that could break with one dropHe bought it anyways.“This one is as good as any other one,” he says to meNow it bears the marks of years.It was always with him, through eve.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/565693/ I am I am earthStubborn, unwilling to give way I am fireLeaping into shadows with light I am rainWashing away pain and sorrow I am windLashing on you like a whip I am skyAmorphous and ever-changing http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/535212/ A thousand centuries passed in that single momentWhen I looked into your eyesWho knew that there could be so much depth within themThat I feel as if I could easily drown with so much as a step forwardAnd become lostI fear what is in them, that it may become reality  http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/478316/ Rain, that shower of mercyCan't seem to alleviate the pain that I feel at this momentIt tries in vain to wipe away sadnessI am drowningIn a sea that I have created,My anxieties swelling,To soon overcome me. My eyes are stinging,from the loss of so many tears.They seem to spi.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/zfsallman/478315/