http://slow.writerscafe.org/hbdennie2013 The original writings of author Heather D en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775985996 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is very rough. It is a 100% true story about what happened to my mom. I was very inspired, as I'm 21 and JUST heard this story for the first time. I need some critique please!!! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/952285/ I've never been so happy...don't know if this is any good or not, would love some opinions :)) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/764112/ Fight on the Shampoo Aisle “S**t.” I grab Troy’s hand and drag him down another aisle, all the way thinking, “This can’t be happening.” As we get to the end of the shampoo aisle and I wait to see if he comes this way, I hold my breath. I peek up at Troy f.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/700529/ Ok, this is something new! Based on my own feelings and experiences, but not, thank goodness, on my own actions! feedback please! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/696728/ Just a short story I wrote. would love some feedback :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/696554/ I have a poem about this night, titled Just One Night. I want to submit either this story or my story What A Life for a class. Which should be submitted? All opinions on everything please! :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/695289/ Creative writing class again, gotta write a short story. Thinking of submitting this one. I want to hear any and all opinions. Also, opinions on cutting off or continuing after age 4. Please & thanks! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/695240/ Been upset lately. An old softball field is my sanctuary. I wrote this from the pitcher's mound. (and yes, that's me in the picture. lol) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/683089/ I have a dilemma... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/681740/ different views on sex is holdin us back....just my thoughts http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/680298/ My professor wants a love poem for valentines day...opinions please :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/678026/ I wrote this with the hopes of submitting an unrhyming poem for a grade in creative writing. I'm trying to grow as a writer, some honest opinions please! :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/676932/ my professor likes my poetry, but says he isn't a rhyming kinda guy. so this is my first non-rhyming poem. Some honest opinions please, cuz I know nothing about this! It's simply a shot in the dark!!! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/674567/ I'm very stressed and upset about everything in my life right now. I know I just need to let it be, but it's so hard. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/672014/ I know what some of you will think: wow, she hates Matt for cheating but look what she's doing with Stephen. I've tried to stop it, but this is how he wants it, so it's out of my hands. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/669875/ I wrote this for my English Comp class a couple semesters back, and everyone has loved it. I know it's long, but I'm proud of this one! My first story posted on here, please review and thank you! :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/668983/ I'm sick of seeing Matt in this small town...it's driving me mad. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/668920/ found out that my suspisions about Matt were right. He was sleeping with his ex Emily for I dont know how long throughout our relationship. and I'm pissed. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/667966/ This is about my date with my good friend Jessey. We spent one night together before he went back to Germany with the Army. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/667960/ I know this is a long one, but I had to get it all out. Please review it and let me know what you think! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/663471/ i was layin on my bed one night with Troy, a new "more than friend," and If Ever I Could Love by Keith Urban came on the radio. this is my reaction. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/644997/ written to Matt, after i realized how much of a lie our relationship was. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/643156/ written to Matt, obviously. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/641782/ this was written four days after Matt left me. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/637605/ at this point, I was very confused on whether or not to take Matt back. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/563977/ this is just some of my favorite moments from past relationships. it's a lot of Matt, several of them are Dalton, and there is a few moments with Ace thrown in there. but mostly Matt. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/485232/ Dalton and I had a nasty break up. this pretty much sums it up. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484949/ at this point i was very confused about some decisions i had made in my life. i needed to get it all out. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484941/ i wrote this for Dalton. i wanted to be in love so bad after Matt, so i just made myself believe i loved him. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484934/ about how i met my then boyfriend Dalton. i used him as a band aid to cover up my pain from Matt http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484928/ one of my earlier poems. written when i was 16 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484921/ The first poem I ever wrote http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484910/ over three months after the break up, i went to a football game with my new boyfriend. once alone, the first person i ran into was Matt. and it killed me http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484897/ in our small town, rumors swirled after me and Matt's break up. this one hit me especially hard. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484895/ about Matt. wrote right after he broke my heart the first time when we were 17 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484888/ about me and Matt, again. im pretty fond of this one. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484882/ For those of you who maybe haven't noticed, most of these seem to be written towards one particular green-eyed person. This is about how we met and the beginning of our relationship when we were 17. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/hbdennie2013/484881/