http://slow.writerscafe.org/LaceyJane The original writings of author LaceyJane en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776192115 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Short story I wrote last night in honor of Halloween. Looking for tips on how to improve the ending. Not sure I like spelling out a scream sound, but I wanted the end to be abrupt. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/LaceyJane/1249212/ First submission, first attempt at poetry in a long time. I'd love some feedback, but please be gentle with me. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/LaceyJane/1248974/