http://slow.writerscafe.org/ByTheWay The original writings of author ByTheWay en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776013065 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 I wrote this poem a couple months back. I was able to get some reviews, but no genuine feedback. I think it needs a couple of read throughs before the message is delivered, though it's pretty long. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/ByTheWay/544624/