http://slow.writerscafe.org/Hann088 The original writings of author Hannah en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776041444 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Looking for advice, second chapter isnt finished yet but added to get feedback so far. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Hann088/1347408/ The first chapter of my book,would appreciate any comments. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Hann088/1347406/ Not sure if im more poetry or lyrical http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Hann088/1341205/ The leaves have all fallen,From the trees like interrupted dreams,The sun has stopped shining,The heavens have ceased,The waters stopped running,Here comes the big freeze,The roads are all empty,Journeys to no avail,The babies cries,Quiet, Lulled, ExtinctThe birds have stopped singing,The music has .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Hann088/1341057/