http://slow.writerscafe.org/cdrippe The original writings of author colleen Drippe' en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776057357 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 I'm breaking up the chapter into scenes because I do long chapters in my books -- generally 8 or 9 k -- and that is too much for a casual reviewer. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/cdrippe/1360838/ This is the scene setter/intro for the book. Not meant to do much else. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/cdrippe/1359241/ Third in a series of novels, one published, one finished but not much chance of publication unless the first one sells okay. Children is a bit sprawly and needs to be tightened up. Input is welcome. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/cdrippe/1359236/