http://slow.writerscafe.org/Eddie6009098 The original writings of author Eddie6009098 en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775297140 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Just a draft of the beginning of a story i would like to write. I need advice on my characters and my pacing of the story. Please be brutally honest on everything, It could really help me to be better http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Eddie6009098/553583/