http://slow.writerscafe.org/RomenDett The original writings of author Ben en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775503175 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is an essay for an application I'm filling out. I'd like feedback, but this essay is mostly a reflection on a difficult situation I faced recently. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/RomenDett/687007/ It seems to be more of a character study than a story. Maybe that's for the best; I like the character and plan to do more with the text and surrounding situation. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/RomenDett/563561/ I've not touched this draft in about 4 years or so. It needs work, I'm sure. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/RomenDett/563558/ It's a prose poem that needs more poetics, or flash fiction that needs more detail. Either way, I like it. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/RomenDett/563555/ Just a short-short story. I believe there may be a few logic problems, but I'll work them out. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/RomenDett/563550/ Here's another draft. It's about a year old and hasn't been touched since I first wrote it. I'm no fan of the ending; I appreciate any suggestions and/or comments. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/RomenDett/563530/ This is a rough draft of the story's first section. I'm obviously still at work on it, though I'm looking for some early criticism. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/RomenDett/562888/