http://slow.writerscafe.org/immortal1967 The original writings of author Immortal1967 en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776050661 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Sunburned schemesOf elucidating dreams.Scarlet nightmaresOf blood red eye stares.Sexed raw to the core,Leaving us greased and sore.Relishing the pain,While leaving a pooling stain.Does the dream have meaning,Or a mirage of our movie screening.Dig deep for the surreal,It doesn't come come as a steal... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/597538/ Heart's beatQuickening paceAll consumingRunning this rat's race.AmericaLand of the freeHome of the braveYet we still don't see.Politicians in powerDemons out of controlSlowly robbing usOf our very soul.Bound by their rulesControlled by fearSuffering soulsSent to the rear.Rich get richer,Poor get the.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/597174/ It's time to wake up,Time for everyone to seeWe are all oneIt's time to make our decree.Relgions don't matterRace doesn't countWe are all humanSo stand up and shout.It's time to end the violenceTime to drop the gunsTime to come togetherUnited as one.Quit living in the pastBefore we repeat their mist.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/597154/ If I could say the things i desire to say,I would say them in the most beautiful way,But sometimes the words are lostMind unable to express my heart's vox.Loved ones mean so muchNever can seem to say enoughJust how much I appreciateAll that you do for me each day.Kind words, loving actsMean more to .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/594073/ CHAPTER 8 - Viktor's Story He held out his hand, palm up, as if to beckon me into his darkness.  I felt defeated, All the things I had thought important, the people who meant the most to me, were now gone, snatched from my grasp like they were nothing.    I didn't know whether to scre.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/593795/ Ethereal mapsOn windswept minds,Crawling with madnessEcstacy devine.Walking across shimmering watersFloating along mindscape winds,Seemingly carelessSoul trancends.Living for the momentNo thought of tomorrow.Life is what we make it,Trying to escape the sorrow.Rising through the murky darknessCreatin.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/593100/ Eager to please,She drops to her knees,Eyes to the floor,As he walks through the door.He sits,He waits,He beckons her to himHis rare little gem.SlowlyShe crawlsAnd sits at his feet,His eyes not daring to meet.Lavish little toysLaid out so coyly,Instruments of pleasureFor his wanton treasure.Patientl.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/593078/ we must start being united http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/593061/ In the heat of the day,My skin melts away.Like the head of a matchBursting into flame.Skulking through the night,Eyes with immortal sight.Moving with the shadowsAvoiding the light.So sleep tight in your bedFantasies living in your head.Silently teeth pierce your neckDrinking your blood run red.For I.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/592878/ Sitting alone on a moonlit windowsillWatching light fall from the  night sky,Reaching out to capture these starry raysYet they elude my grasp all the way.Falling with a grace from above,Light turns to darkness,On this earth where we are bound.Looking up we see those twinkling lights,Yet there i.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/592605/ Fractured,A crack in the mirror,Distorted viewEverything seemingly askew.Shattered,Pieces of glassScattered on the floorReflections of what wasIs now no more.Crushed,Grinding the pieces inPowder from shardsPutting the pieces backJust too hard.Fractured,Shattered,Crushed,Just a breathBlows the pieces.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/592591/ Everyday, you on my mind,Can't get away from itNo matter how hard I try.Waking thoughts,Nightly dreams,Sometimes wonder,If things are really as they seem.Sometimes wonder,If I just made you up,To hurt myself.My mind ponders.Ponders the idea,Of you and me.I feel your love,I hope you see.See me the wa.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/592144/ CHAPTER 7 - FEAST Although I apparently slept for a few hours, it was not a fitful sleep by any means.  Visions of black clouds rolling by, with fiery red eyes peering through, setting my mind and inner self ablaze, haunted my dreams.  Setting up, cold sweat running down my body in what se.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/591678/ CHAPTER 6 - BURIAL I looked back at Reginald with the same horror as was shown on his face, and motioned for him to sit in the chair facing the ornate desk.  I recounted all that had happened this past night to him, leaving nothing out.  I wanted a different perspective on things, wanted t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/591650/ Legs shakey,Wobbly,Like walking on Bowls of jello,Muscles aching,Mental anguish.Forsaking any semblanceOf normalcy.Arms jerking,Head falling back,Convulsions starting to wrackThis feeble body.Meds come,Spasms start to slow.Beginning to wakeConscious risingFrom an abyss down below.Come back to m.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/591325/ Forced reflection,Foggy recollection,Hated introspection.Haphazard dreamsHeld together withJagged seams.Whimsical nightmaresBrings forthSilent bloodcurdling screamsCausing vivid hallucinationsFlying,Falling,Crawling,Dead. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/591312/ Delving into the darkness,Taking a sip here and there,Savoring the flavor,Gluttony abounds,Not willing to share.Lapping at the blood,Like a Baskerville hound.Reveling in the fire,The fire of my demise.You crave it all,Tasting, eating, Ravenous to the core.Should I bleed a little moreYou carnivo.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/590400/ Tips of my fingers,Soiled in dirt.Strands of my heartCaught unalert.Love and loss,The name of the game.Yet the pain and tormentAlways the same.Playing with emotions,Just come clean,Trying to hideWhat is always seen.People always wonderWhy walls so high,Because of people like youWho love to lie.Prote.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/589677/ I touch your rose soft skin,Your energy flows to me,Kissing me sweetly,Blood quickening,Body quaking,Soul expanding.Lighting the fireBurning within,I take from you nowLeeching your lifeTasting your essanceBending your will,You recieve my breathLike the kiss of lifeFilling your loinsBrought to your k.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/589529/ CHAPTER 5 - FLAMES I woke up in a heap on the floor.  I sat up somewhat, looking around.  I saw father's body still laying beside the bed, looking stiff and somewhat puffy now.  I pulled myself to my feet, and willed myself to walk down the stairs to Reginald's, the plantation manager.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/589387/ My views on what is coming http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588832/ These voices in my mind Running 'round inside Telling me I'll be dead, At least that's what they said. These voices in my brain Driving me insane. Smoked too much pot Now they're never gonna stop. Can't stop the voices! Gotta kill the voices! See wha.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588830/ Heart pounding,Blood pouring,Life draining,Seeping outOn my floor.Wondering,Crying,Screaming,Why, why WHY?I know,You know,Uncaring,Despising,Hating,Dying.Why? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588679/ She loves me,She plays a good game.She is truthful,She is a liar.She cares,She pretends,She wants to be with me,She is a put on.She is right here,She is so far away.She is warm,She is cold as ice.She is all I want,And more,She is a fantasy,A heartsore.My bullish manbrainSees what is right in front o.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588351/ I touch your rose soft skin,Your energy flows to me,Kissing me sweetly,Blood quickening,Body quaking,Soul expanding.Lighting the fireBurning within,I take from you nowLeeching your lifeTasting your essanceBending your will,You recieve my breathLike the kiss of lifeFilling your loinsBrought to your k.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588267/ We are all one... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588188/ The darkness settles in And consumes my very being. No more light inside this inner cell Only coldness and the burning fires of hell. Love won, and love lost once again. But my love will never see the light of day, Because the darkness comes And drives it away.&nbs.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588168/ Darkness overtakes my soul, Like a thief in the night Come to steal my gold. Veins of madness, Twist and turn, Weaving through this darkness On a collision course to crash and burn. Brink of depair, pain all too real, The darkness sinks in further, Coveri.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588166/ If I was gone this day, Would my thought even cross your mind? Would you miss anything about me, Or just live a lie. If I was gone today, Would the world be a brighter place? Would everything seem the same, Or would lives truely be shattered in this ungodly race?&n.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588161/ CHAPTER 4 - THE LETTER I looked down at the crumbled piece of paper in my hand.  I unfolded it, and stared at the words on the page, not really seeing them, still somewhat in shock by everything.  The smoke coming off the upside down cross pattern on the bed was slowly dying down, but it .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/588153/ CHAPTER 3 - FATHER Roberto Ithicus, master of prestigious Ithicas Plantation, born February 8, 1812, that was my father.  Born to immigrant parents, he grew up around the plantation that his father created.  Lon Ithicus, my grandfather built the Ithicus plantation house himself with hired .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/587742/ CHAPTER 2 - HOME The house is a lavish two story house.   Ornate staircase spiraling upwards, like a graceful ribbon leading one upwards and onwards it seemed.  Downstairs was the entryway, wide and expansive, with elaborate tables set at each end full of the most gorgeous flowers that sou.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/587626/ another attempt at erotic poetry with a somewhat violent twist http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/587605/ Blood red skies.   That's the last thing I remembered seeing that fateful evening long ago.  And how fitting it all was.  How surrealistic as I look back on it in retrospect.   I remember it as if it were yesterday, which of course it was not, it was nearly 150 years ago, but oh .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/587207/ http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/587205/ Blood red rainTwisted words on the pageGushing forth from my Tormented mind.Rambling uselesslyShaking uncontrollablyCrying soundlessly.Pen scratchingBreaking the silenceIssuing the painFelt inside.Why they askSo dark and confusedNot understanding Cunning madnessHeart on paperFor all to see.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/587143/ One of my older poems. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586892/ Dark stormy nights in my soul,Whirlwind desires going out of control.Heavy hearted, pained and confused,Lost and tormented, no one to turn to.My mind keeps racing,My heart has lost its way,Lost and abandoned,Don't know what to do or say.Love is lost,Love is not real,Love has no hope,For a soul that .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586884/ Crimson doors Set against a black lit night. Darkness comes calling, Shutting out the light. Pain is his pleasure, A heart thats cold as steel, No longer caring, No longer able to feel. His walls growing taller, Unwilling to let anyone in. Not willing to .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586880/ Wistful driftings, Mind never at ease, Constant confusion, Depression unending. So many that say they care, So many that throw the "L" word around, They only love when they get something in return. They only care when it benefits them. Pain is my only true com.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586878/ A vampire at heart, That's what I am, Wanting to control All that I can. The blackness of night Is my time of day, And every place that I tread Is my domain. Catch me if you can, If you know where I lie. Just beware that You are racing against t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586875/ The darkness folds in around me, The mists close in around my feet, The scent rises to my nostrils, The smell of blood is oh so sweet. Come to me now my perfect victim, Exquisite for the taste, Like a fine wine That will never waste. Just the thought makes me .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586872/ Darkness enfolds me, Wrapping loving arms of comfort Shutting out the hurts and pains Shutting out the light of day. Walls of comfort Slowly being resurrected Tired of the heartache and pain Tired of everything. Friends offer comfort and support, Unable t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586870/ When you look in my eyes, What do you see? An everlasting darkness Consuming me. Tears of blood, Stream down my face, Signs of the shame, Scars from the pain. You try to stop it, But to no avail. This all consuming darkness, My living hell.&nbsp.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586741/ Beating heart, Ticking away the moments of life, Ticking time bomb Fighting to stay alive. Dying on the inside, Darkness closing in, Wrapping protective wings Around soul and mind. Love is love, And what is that, Sometimes wondering If love fall.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586738/ first attempt at erotica poetry http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586721/ Freedom through heartache http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586379/ Black roses, Pitchest of nights. Piercing the darkness With my immortal sight. Searching for what was lost, For what cannot be found. For my dark gift Has me nestled safe and sound. No more brightness, No more light. My life was lost On that dar.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586373/ One of my fav's that I have written. Was published in a local publication back in the mid 90's while living in Colorado. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586369/ Written for an ex of mine..lol. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/immortal1967/586363/