http://slow.writerscafe.org/Annalynn The original writings of author Annalynn Koopmans en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776333535 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 PrologueAugust 1998Jeremiah Ward had a good life. Some would say a blessed life.  A life full of love, laughter and joy, Jeremiah thought.   He shared this life with his beautiful wife, Garbine Fellini Ward, and his children, Adam and Gia. Adam , just shy of twelve-years-old, .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1940318/ Romance, Thriller suspense, fiction http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1940317/ Any comments, reviews or cirtiques , doesnt matter the length, will be much appreciated ! Need all the help i can get! thank you! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1540560/ ChapterFifteen I woke up and turned my headtowards the night-stand, it was only Six-thirty in the morning. Relieved that Ididn’t have to jump out of bed anytime soon, I turned my body towards Jason, hewas watching me. His lips twisted into a radiant smile, his eyes pie.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1534875/ Reviews, critques , anything will be helpful! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1516383/ Chapter Thirteen  “Vick! Wake up! Please, Vick! You’re havinga nightmare! Wake up!! “ a voice from another realm shouted at me. My conscious obeying his command , my eyessnapped open, I quickly sat up : screaming and gasping for air. Observing thesurround.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1515778/ Chapter TwelveVictoriaPreston insisted walkingme to my front door.  He was tall, andbroad. He had brown hair and grey eyes. He was certainly attractive, but ajerk.  Preston - his name said itall:  he was full-of-himself, way tooforward and flirty. Not the kind of.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1515769/ Reviews! Critques please! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1515766/ Chapter tenVictoriaWe were allstanding in a crowd. Emma was dancing with Cole, well more like “making-babies”on the dancefloor. Tim, Luke and Nick were discussing cars and mechanics.  Jason was edgy, he kept searching forsomething around the club. Almost every time.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1514893/ Chapter Nine              JasonI was driving asfast as possible towards the club. It was already ten-pm, Victoria must alreadybe at club with the rest… With Nick… Nick wanted her, I could see his eyeshea.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1514883/ ChapterEight Allstars was reasonably quiet consideringit was Saturday. We were sitting at the same table like last time, on my rightside sat Jason, Donovan and Ashley, on my left side sat Emma, Cole and Nick.Jason’s mood changed the second we stepped in Allstars. He seemed agit.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1514880/ ChapterSevenIt was one-fifteen-pm, I was sitting at thekitchen counter staring at my phone. I’ve changed my outfit five-times, beforeI settled for light-blue denim short that hugged my thighs nicely, with blackankle Converse sneakers. I matched it with a tight, sleeveless, blac.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1514053/ Chapter SixEmma continued our conversation about hersister’s upcoming wedding , I only caught a few words here-and �"there.  I was too distracted. My body was shiveringbeneath Jason’s touch. I’ve never felt this aroused before. My brain was fightingwi.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1514051/ ChapterFiveMy mouth might be incapable of pronouncingwords, but my mind was on a roller-coaster producing thoughts:  ‘Whatthe…   ‘ ‘Seriously?’ ‘ Two-days andthree-encounters- Was he following me? ‘    &nbs.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1514049/ Chapter 4VictoriaMy legs walking full-speed to the art shop,my mind on overdrive. The Hawaiian hulk finally had name, Jason.  Not only was he trying to apologize and makeit up, he was asking me out. And not only did I refuse the stranger -  I refused Jason Akamai. A filthy .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1508877/ ChapterThreeJasonManaging to control my panting into silent breatheswas difficult. I was crouched  behind atrash container in an alley , it was barely large enough to hide my body. Thegirl I just ran into fell hard on the ground. She looked familiar- I wanted tohelp her up.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1508086/ Chapter TwoIt was a slow day at the café today. I’ve decidedto leave work earlier than normal today. I have to run some errands,  I didn’t feel like doing yesterday. It was myday-off and I wanted to hermit inside the house.  Usually we close the café&n.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1508083/ Chapter OneVictoriaI woke up gasping for air ,  hot and bothered , dripping wet with sweat.  Taking in the surroundings- a rush of reliefgoes through me. “I am home, it’s all right I am  home, “ I mumble to myself. “ It was just adream , jus.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1508081/ Vickí a 26year-old with a haunting past. She tries her best to keep her emotions to herself, but when she meets the mysterious Jason, unwanted feelings rush to the surface, leaving her ultra-exposed. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Annalynn/1508074/