http://slow.writerscafe.org/OliveBlanche The original writings of author OliveBlanche en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776115298 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Tit for tatfor tit bitsSmallbattles won the war To think onit becomes too muchI think ofyou without a touchFor manyyears so lonely to liveA lifewithheld, no more to thrive. Hatebecomes the truer forceUnion broken, change of course .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/OliveBlanche/1556068/ This is the beginning of a novel I hope to write. I would like some feedback on the writing itself, please. Is it something you would like to read and does it hold any promise? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/OliveBlanche/1556030/