http://slow.writerscafe.org/jmueller25 The original writings of author MagicWriter en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776033960 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 this is just an excerpt from the book im working on.. wanted some opinions and critiques http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/jmueller25/628160/ Many mistakes I have madebut none I have regretyou choose to look the other wayHow can you just forget?I'm tired of tryingto be someone I can't beI'm asking you pleaselove me, for meWhat choice do we havewhen you tell me I'm wrongI can't change your mindI guess I don't belongNow that we have partedM.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/jmueller25/624332/