http://slow.writerscafe.org/scott007 The original writings of author scott007 en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776195451 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 All I want to know is does the character seem crazy enough? And does the scene create a vivid image? Thanks. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/scott007/635942/ The Protagonist in the book is a notoriously crazy prisoner. He is mean, and he only enjoys to fight, nothing more, nothing less. Basically, all I want to know is does the scene seem violent enough? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/scott007/635937/