http://slow.writerscafe.org/haildanielle The original writings of author Laura Warren en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775992547 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 A very rough draft just needing some feedback and direction. I have a vision as to where I want this to go and need some constructive criticism from whoever has it to offer. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/haildanielle/1748712/