http://slow.writerscafe.org/Gokai The original writings of author Gokai Ramashita en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776481100 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Chapter 10 “What do you want, Finch. “You failed.” “What…?” “Your mission. You failed.” “I was attacked by a group of Uzi-wielding maniacs.” “Do you know where Vandal is, his hideout; his resources?” “No.” &ldquo.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1779778/ Chapter 9.Finn hurriedly drew the gun he had retrieved from the man he had initially fought in the Egypt room and fired off a shot. It wasn't aimed at anything, in fact, it was aimed at the ground. But it did enough to the masked man. Who began sprinting away as fast as he could. Finn gave chase. Th.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777090/ Chapter 8Everything stood still for a second. Finn was aware of the grazing feeling he had felt on his forehead and was aware of the bullet that enlodged itself in the fake marble paneling that covered the walls but he still just stared at the hole trying to determine if it was real or not. The popu.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777087/ Chapter 7 Finn never liked sitting in one place for too long. Now, four hours after his incident with the bear, he was sitting in the enormous dining room, waiting for Andrei to make an appearance like he had promised.  Finn had come here thirty minutes ago. In that time, Finn had shifted in hi.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777084/ Chapter 6  Finn crept along the ground, trying to make as little noise as possible. He had been hunting once or twice, he knew what the sport was all about but he still didn't enjoy it. When Finn thought about it, Zach never liked hunting either.  Crack! Finn stepped on a branch and the sh.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777083/ Chapter 5. Finn was looking out the window again. He wasn't watching trees this time, though. He was watching the clouds; picking out patterns and similarities between them.  Finn was sitting on the third-to-last seat on the (empty) private jet and was eating from a bag of peanuts that he had f.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777076/ Chapter 4. “Mr. Fineas Alexander Smith, that is a strange name, most of the time, Fineas is spelled with a ‘ph’, but not his time. Did your mother name you that?” Finn opened his eyes, expelling all of the static that seemed to float in front of his eyes. He was in a room in .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777074/ Chapter 3 “What! were you thinking!” Linda yelled with ferocity. Finn was sitting on a bar stool at the counter in Linda’s kitchen. Finn had bandages on his leg, head, and arm. All of them were painful and Finn didn't want to move as the argument continued. I wasn't really “t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777072/ Chapter 2 It was Finn’s turn to knock on the door again. He had followed the instructions exactly,  room 155 in the apartment building that their late grandma lived in. The door opened, a woman about thirty-five opened the door only part way, barring the way in.  “...Hello?&rdq.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1777070/ Ah, the first chapter. The challenge of hooking your reader is a true challenge. Isn't it? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1776420/ A 15-year-old boy from a fictional suburb in NYC is tasked with stopping one of the world's most wealthy and dangerous mad-man and his powerful allies. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Gokai/1776415/