http://slow.writerscafe.org/allonsy The original writings of author allonsy en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776335083 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is my first attempt at writing a book and wanted to get some feedback. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/allonsy/1842390/ This is my first attempt at writing a book. I've only done a chapter so far, but need feedback on the story, concept, characters, etc. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/allonsy/1842389/