http://slow.writerscafe.org/s2245687 The original writings of author Rruiyun en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776053293 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 please give me some comments to improve my writing skills thank you http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/s2245687/1924724/     I met a weird person when I work in a convenience store. It was a very busy day. I and my fellow worker named Susan  were making coffee for customers. Suddenly, a man yelled at me" Where's the resume paper?" His voice so loud that I was frightened. I look at Susan because I didn't.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/s2245687/1923631/