http://slow.writerscafe.org/JoannaBarlow The original writings of author Joanna Matilda Barlow en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775986557 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 March 25th 2027…Morning…At Dinah and Shingo’s house…Luna was just getting up for another day of school. She was also with her pack by her bed. She Thought about pulling out a smoke and lighting up… but she didn’t want to do it in the house. She left the pack t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1954057/ (Disclaimer: I take no personal self credit on the use of any copyrighted names of the Series Criminal Minds. All names and content are used basely for fanfic purpose and nothing more.To CBS studios: I take no pleasure in using any material or the names and content from the series of Criminal Minds... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1954053/ Metropolis University…The Dorms…Room #330..Prince Alvin: *Drinking a glass of wine and toasting to Alice* Alice, this is the beginning of things to come.Alice: *Smiles; Toasting* To the beginning of things to come…Prince Alvin: *Sighs; thinking* Alice, there’s a wild theor.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1954049/ Dinah: *Voice-over* This is the house that my mother or my late mother had once wanted to have for herself. But now it’s a house for me and Shingo. We are now married and Luna is living with us. Shes’ got her own room and we however had long since convinced the Realtor who was trying to .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1954048/ Luna: *Voice-over* This is it… The Chapter where Dinah’s heyday of being the Thunderic Fury of the team gets reawakened and renewed. this is where it begins. It’s a long time waiting. What they face is a great Maw of creatures… Shadow creatures and the faint touch of demoni.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1954043/ Dinah: *Voice-over* This is the Chapter that counts down to the Wedding of Shingo and Me. It is getting close to the Wedding. I am getting nervous. I am soon gonna be a married woman. I just hope that i can hold on a little longer. The End of Beryl had come and gone. The world was safe. or so we had.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1954022/ Terra comes out from the Shadows…Terra: *Voice-over* My name is Terra… and i have done horrible things.I have sworn allegiance to an Evil Queen. Committing crimes and evil deeds under her name.(A army of shadow creatures and evil beings are shown storming the city streets; the remnance.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943876/ A week later…At the underground Cavern…Beryl: *Looking at Terra* You have been running all your life. Haven’t you?Terra: Yes.Beryl: You’ve done awful things. That is all in the past.Terra: It is.Beryl: *Looking at Terra* You know what you need to do?Terra: Yes. I do.Beryl: .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943873/ Alice: *Voice-over* This is the coming of age for the youngest fighter. Luna. She has now reached the breaking out moment. This is her shining moment of embracing the teen years of her life. She’s part cat so this will hit her differently. But this is her moment. She stays with us as we rally .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943819/ Dinah: *Voice-Over* I feel so empty without my kids… But it was for the best to send them for the time being till after the Threat with Trigon was over… to the Planet Vulcan. I don’t want my babies to ever have to face the terror of Scath. I can handle all the things in the world.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943818/ In space…In the USS Enterprise…The Bridge…Kirk: *Looking at Scotty* Scotty… we’re making the trek to Earth… set up the teleporters and sync them with the Coordinates for Metropolis. The Rhapsody girls are in trouble and as favor to our member Ensign Larmina&h.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943816/ Prince Alvin: *Voice-Over* Dinah just had her babies… And almost lost her life… The doctors almost faced failure of bringing her back… But in the midst of it all. Dinah is Alive and she’s now a Mother… *Sniffling* Sorry for the shot of tears if i bust off crying. It.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943814/ Dinah: *Voice-over* “Love all. Trust a few. Do wrong to none.” William Shakespeare. I in my life lived to be tough. I was loose wired and hard to control. But it all lead me to this moment. The time of Delivery… Giving Birth to 3 kids. I when this all began… thought that i .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943813/ Martin: *Voice-over* Previously on the adventures of the Rhapsody Girls Z!“My friend the communistHolds meetings in his RVI can’t afford his gasSo I’m stuck here watching TVI don’t have digitalI don’t have diddly squatIt’s not having what you wantIt’s wantin.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943812/ Luna: *Voice-over* Previously on the Adventures of the Rhapsody Girls Z!…“Girl: *Panting* … *Seeing the creatures gone* I think i lost them. It’s about time too… *Panting*Girl: *Shrieks* Ahhhhh! *Running off again* Not again. What is this? Night of the non-stop Night.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943810/ “The Prom of Dreams and the terror of Dr. Illumination. Martin Marco on the Hero roster! Welcome aboard to the team.”Martin: *Voice-over* Continued from chapter 86…Inside the Caved-in Tunnel…Martin: *Tending to Luna* You alright?Luna: I don’t know… *Shaking her.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943808/ “Pregnancy munching Hunger… Training at night. “putting on the Terra” Raven and Sailor Mars Allegiance in progress.”Paige: *Voice-over* This is still week 19. Dinah is gaining weight. Feeling the weight rise up. But now there are happy moments that had come now….. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943805/ Pearl: *Voice-over* Dinah is now week 19 and preparing to stick in for week 20. The Pregnancy is moving along. But we also have a set of troubles. One being the new girl that came into the City. We don’t know anything about her. we have not even met her. But we plan on it. She’s probably.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943804/ “Inside Babies Grow Conscious and 3 senshi’s join the battle against Beryl and her Web of Evil; “Look over Yonder for a Blonde girl to come running in.”Dinah: *Voice-Over* I am Pregnant. I just went through week 14 of my Pregnancy and it was not the least bit calm. I am Actua.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943801/ Dinah: *Voice-over* The Pregnancy gets more and more complicated… but i fight it. i don’t let it take me. I endure. Shingo and I spend a little time together. But during that time… our family faces a problem with Luna… the minor fall out throws us a bit off the line. Plus .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943799/ “Happy New Mayhem… Pregnancy Progression leads on. Dinah’s bedridden beginnings and Who’s the Mystery trouble maker with the Purple suited Evil?”Pearl: *Voice-over* The Pregnancy moves ahead and a new set of Fountain trouble begins. Things start to shake up leading to .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943798/ “Paige on the Couch with Dr. Walters. Pearl’s fears are heard…Dinah’s Lifestyle… Transformed and Christmas Draws Near and brings Cheer to all”Dinah: *Voice-over* Previously on The Adventures of the Rhapsody Girls Z!“Paige: Raven didn’t have to do wha.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943791/ “Rhapsody Girls Z! home becomes Rhapsody Girls Z! Tower? Hello My Duckies… Mad Sam’s British Law is now. Mind Warp Raven’s Mind…Heroes on alert.” Part 2Raven: *Voice-over* Continued from Chapter 79…At Grandma Rikku’s house…Paige: *Shaking her.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943789/ “Rhapsody Girls Z! home becomes Rhapsody Girls Z! Tower? Hello My Duckies… Mad Sam’s British Law is now. Mind Warp Raven’s Mind…Heroes on alert.” Part 1At Grandma Rikku’s house…That Afternoon…Nov. 4th 2025Paige: *Walking inside and grunting* .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943786/ Nov. 3rd 2022Monday Morning…Grandma Rikku’s House…In the Dining Room…Dinah: *Looking at her sisters* Paige, Pearl… I was thinking about it a bit last night about what we are gonna do about the fact that we have Raven with us. I mean that Chloe doesn’t even kno.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943757/ “Rhapsody Family and the Rhapsody Brothers Meet Raven Of Azarath. The good… the Evil… The Mysterious. Open the doors for new dangers that call thy name.”Metropolis…The home of the Rhapsody Girls Z! It was a wonderful day. Bright and fresh. and the day after Halloween.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943756/ “Halloween Haunt, Rhapsody Girls Z! Fright night. Bewitching hour draws in… In Quoth the Raven of Azarath. Paige and her sisters Quote the Raven. “So says the Raven… Nevermore”Paige: *Voice over* When we were 11, we never really thought that we would ever come to face.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943754/ “One year later… Things that once were… move to change. Pearl on the road and a driver in the family… Romance matures for some and finds the ones down on the luck for love. Rhapsody Girls Z! Normal Teens or forever called to duty.” Part 3.Luna: *Voice-over* Continued.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943753/ “One year later… Things that once were… move to change. Pearl on the road and a driver in the family… Romance matures for some and finds the ones down on the luck for love. Rhapsody Girls Z! Normal Teens or forever called to duty.” Part 2.Paige: *Voice-over* Continue.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943751/ “One year later… Things that once were… move to change. Pearl on the road and a driver in the family… Romance matures for some and finds the ones down on the luck for love. Rhapsody Girls Z! Normal Teens or forever called to duty.” Part 1Recap of the final moments of.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943750/ This is where the stakes are higher. The pressures are greater. A Pregnancy, A Graduation, a first year of college. The second year of college and a Maturing case from one of their own... ??? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1943748/ My Transgender delights knows no end.My Transgender delights shows no trend.It's mine to borrow.It's yours for tomorrow.My Transgender Delights stirs the wind.My Transgender Delights blows the mindIt rocks the boat...It shocks the moat...My transgender Delights makes me lonesome.My transgender Delig.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1939762/ “Rhapsody Girls in Danger; Falling to your Death is the way to go out. Prince Curtis Brutally beat! Rhapsody Family FACE/OFF Against ZOD! VENGEANCE BE CALLED! Angelic Overlord… WE NEED YOU! Justice League… Big Guns Dishing out firepower. “GOODBYE GENERAL ZOD! Time to say BO.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938818/ COUNTDOWN TO THE FINAL BATTLE WITH GENERAL ZOD!!! Rhapsody Girls Z! Message To General Zod: “ZOD! GO TO HELL! THIS IS OUR WORLD AND YOU ARE SENTENCED TO EXILE! EXILE!”Pearl: *Voice-over* Previously on the Adventures of the Rhapsody Girls Z!“Red Queen: In time it will be better. you.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938817/ “Relaxation and peace… normal life be had; King John comes out the Victor and wins the girls. Chloe Sullivan… WATCHTOWER… Arise from the ashes and comes forth again. TILL DEATH!!!! Here chimes the Drums of WAR! COUNTDOWN to the Final Battle against Zod has Begun!”Pai.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938814/ “Rest in Peace Mrs. Princess Rikku Rhapsody. Eternal Slumber abounds. Dinah’s Breakdown and agony busts down the door; Red Queen comes to crash at the Rhapsody Girls homestead. Mourning in whole. the Rhapsody Girls Z! say their last good-byes to their mother. The Countdown to the war aga.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938813/ “Rest in Peace Mrs. Princess Rikku Rhapsody. Eternal Slumber abounds. Dinah’s Breakdown and agony busts down the door; Red Queen comes to crash at the Rhapsody Girls homestead. Mourning in whole. the Rhapsody Girls Z! say their last good-byes to their mother. The Countdown to the war aga.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938807/ Hark! the presence of the Red Queen draws near. Zod rolls in with a sneak attack. Professor Queen’s enlightening research shines its light. Amara, Michelle and Trista All-in and ready to move. Uh-oh! Watchtower under Lockdown?Dinah: *Voice-over* Last time on the Adventures of the Rhapsody Girl.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938805/ “Sic semper tyrannis” The South is regained… KABOOM! Shanna is a hero? Shanna Rhapsody AKA. Molten Mind! The Rhapsody Girls Z! Vs. General Zod and Basqat Round 1. Preemptive Strike on the line. The truth exposed about Tess’s Involvement with Checkmate… The Mystery beh.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938803/ “Agent Mercer… press in. Position 1938 to Position 2849… Rhapsody Girls Z! It’s your move!; Zod launches preemptive strike on The Rhapsody Girls Z! “Come and rescue Angelic Raven and Angelic Darkhand if you dare.” Shanna Wylee now a permanent Rhapsody?! Rhapsody.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938800/ “Welcome to the Phantom Zone, Paige, Pearl and Dinah; Fight for your life. Pearl’s emotional reaction to the Zone. HELP! Rhapsody Girls to Watchtower… “GET US OUT OF THE PHANTOM ZONE!””Rhapsody Girls: *As Pearl; Voice-over* Last time on the Adventures of the Rhap.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938795/ “Infiltration of Cyntechnics; Rhapsody Girls Z! Take a life or Expose activity of Pidge Stroker. Berserk- word of Thunder Mistress …Dinah goes mad; New Threat Looms with Words… “Your Move”; Ding-Dong Agent Amanda Waller is calling. Tess…in good charms with Rhap.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938669/ “Infiltration of Cyntechnics; Rhapsody Girls Z! Take a life or Expose activity of Pidge Stroker. Berserk- word of Thunder Mistress …Dinah goes mad; New Threat Looms with Words… “Your Move”; Ding-Dong Agent Amanda Waller is calling. Tess…in good charms with Rhap.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938665/ “Infiltration of Cyntechnics; Rhapsody Girls Z! Take a life or Expose activity of Pidge Stroker. Berserk- word of Thunder Mistress …Dinah goes mad; New Threat Looms with Words… “Your Move”; Ding-Dong Agent Amanda Waller is calling. Tess…in good charms with Rhap.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938647/ “Infiltration of Cyntechnics; Rhapsody Girls Z! Take a life or Expose activity of Pidge Stroker. Berserk- word of Thunder Mistress …Dinah goes mad; New Threat Looms with Words… “Your Move”; Ding-Dong Agent Amanda Waller is calling. Tess…in good charms with Rhap.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938643/ “Infiltration of Cyntechnics; Rhapsody Girls Z! Take a life or Expose activity of Pidge Stroker. Berserk- word of Thunder Mistress …Dinah goes mad; New Threat Looms with Words… “Your Move”; Ding-Dong Agent Amanda Waller is calling. Tess…in good charms with Rhap.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938642/ “Infiltration of Cyntechnics; Rhapsody Girls Z! Take a life or Expose activity of Pidge Stroker. Berserk- word of Thunder Mistress …Dinah goes mad; New Threat Looms with Words… “Your Move”; Ding-Dong Agent Amanda Waller is calling. Tess…in good charms with Rhap.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938641/ ”Professor Change-up… Paige and Pearl meet the mysterious boys. Dating in Bliss for Mrs. Princess Rikku Rhapsody… The Hunt for Jor-el’s attacker begins. Roll up the lights for John Jones; Greetings From The Martian Manhunter- He comes in peace.1Pearl: *Voice-over* Previousl.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938640/ “Shingo reawakened as Mystic Thunder… MYSTIC THUNDER RETURNS!!! ; Solar Tower construction begins… Jor-el On Earth??? A Face to Face meet with Jor-el in person and a forced sacrifice by the hands of Tess.”That night at Princess Rikku’s house…The girls bedroom&h.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938638/ “Happy Birthday Rhapsody Girls Z! Let the Celebration Commence. A destined meet with Jor-el… Major Zod’s compassionate side makes haste.”During the night…Paige: *Dreaming in her sleep* No… Tess. don’t do it… Please. Pearl… Dinah! The Solar t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/JoannaBarlow/1938635/