http://slow.writerscafe.org/MrKrene The original writings of author Mr.Krene en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776107238 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 The beginning of the story from the perspective of someone important but not the main character. It is just there to provide a little back story. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/MrKrene/1160873/ This is a story I'm working on and I could really use some help editing and reviewing. All ideas for changing the story or improving it are welcome. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/MrKrene/1160870/