http://slow.writerscafe.org/yellogoodbye The original writings of author ~DeathByButterflies~ en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775239839 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Uh... yea.... I really don't know.... Comments? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/792152/ Let me know what you think, please. Have I gotten better? Worse? Or just too dull to judge? What can I improve upon? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/757603/ Please don't be so judgemental as to read the title and think I mean drugs, or anything as such. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/750311/ Didn't know what to title it... I tried, anyway. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/748137/ Um... Yea... I don't know what to say. I'm a fake, does that work? Just read the poem, I guess.... I want feedback. It'd be nice if you would tell me what you think. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/748136/ I hate it and the flow isn't right, but I'll post it anyway, I guess. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/746406/ My heart bursts,And at last leaves,Showing the sadnessSeen underneath.This fall brings pain,But I always knewIt would end like this,Somehow worthless,The life I lived,Breaking away.The hurt,The fear,Every lie full of pain,It all led back to this...I'm still afraid,But y.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731752/ The longer the wait,The more it hurts.Endless hate,Broken words.Left alone,There was nothingBut destruction and lies,Torn open by all that you knew.The senses wrought,The pain still grew,Wondering why you ever fought.This wasn't meant to be,It's endless,Don't you see?Devi.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731748/ This isn't what I wanted,I feel your haunting eyes,Seeing in the darknessThe falseness of my disguise.Go back to where you started,This wasn't supposed to show,You weren't supposed to know,This is where I hide.Try to forget,You don't need to see this side.It isn't worth it,Bein.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731744/ Hm... Nonsense. Is it even really a poem? Doubtful. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731741/ I don't get it, and it doesn't flow correctly. At least, not in my perspective. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731739/ Hmm... Doesn't make much sense, but I don't really care. Words flow but what do I know about such a thing as poetry? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731734/ I'll always be the same. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731209/ The other sideTo one such as me,Those you don't knowAnd will never see.Fought in the forest of hardships and lies,But did you ever see the other side?There is more than this,More than me.In a world so cruel,i am nothing.If held in the light,Would you see the flip side?Or banish it away,Run and hide?.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731207/ The lowercase i is to show my insignificance. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731203/ An old one, short, not much to it. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731201/ It would have been better if it was longer, but it's not, and I'll leave it like it is. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731200/ No one knows,No one seesThe darkness inside,The demons in me.Hidden well,You must suppose,For they were not discoveredLong ago.Held inside,These demons grew,And within,I am no moreBut a demon's brew.My soul their foodAs I watch from within.My death,Their joy,A very last sin.Dead and gone,A life unko.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731199/ How I felt, but not how I wanted to feel. That is my Emotional Lie. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731197/ How would you know?What would you say,If you knew,If you could see,What was inside.If you found the shattered pieces,Of who I used to be.What I once wasIs not for anyone to see.I tried to share my life,Give it hope and not the knife.Now it seems that was wrong.My answer was not right.I should've lef.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731196/ The words stem, They flow in pieces From the mind Unto this world. Saying, Writing, The flow never destroyed. These words come from everywhere, Your life, Joy, Sadness and anger, All expressed in turn. What happens if nothing is felt? Do the words flow faster, Easier? Untold It seems, All is not wel.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731194/ Too short, too much rhyme. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731075/ Seems I wasted my life being with you,All I want is to walk away...Maybe I was wrongTo think I'd finally find my life....You took away all I ever knew,And now my heart can't forgive what you've done.Maybe if I end it,Maybe if I died,I wouldn't play such a big partIn your life....I'd walk my whole li.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731065/ An unknown sadness,Deep within.Where did it come from?Under your skin,Below the surface.Time is up,Lost again.Thought this sadness would leave,That everything would be okay again.Seems this was wrongAnd now nothing is left.What is there to find,In such a cold world?It's emptying sadness,It's bowl of.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731061/ An unknown sadness deep within,Hiding your heart,Hiding your sins.All you've done as a sacrifice,It means nothing,She has forgotten your life.Everything is gone,She remembers you no more.All you've done for her,She sees no reason to care.Why did you dare?To help her?To be aware?She has no feelings t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731059/ I have no idea what this one is supposed to be. It seems slightly random to me. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731057/ This story has a few different views, but I hope that doesn't take away from its message. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731054/ Trips as in triple. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731051/ Did you ever feel the pain inside?This twisted blade,An unshared life?All this hurt,With nowhere to go.Hiding in the mind,Waiting to spring.It will hurt,And leave nothing left.Wondering when and how it will strike,Whether from memories,Or your old knife.Wondering,Wallowing,Twisting the blade.The bla.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731049/ Once again, and early peom. Strange inspiration for this one. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731047/ This could have just as easily been called "The Whip". The whip mentioned in the poem is fictional, of course. It was only meant to describe the pain of what my stepfather brought down upon us. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731042/ An early poem. I really don't have much to say http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731036/ Yes, I was depressed, and this is what came of it... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731032/ My first love poem. It isn't very good, but I tried. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731029/ This was for my little sister, I made it to describe what she was going through when we encountered a rough patch in our lives. It's over now, but I still wanted to post this. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731024/ Dull... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731020/ Short, sweet, and to the point. An old one, and not one of my best. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731016/ Heh, a love poem. Something I wouldn't usually write, but here goes nothing... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/yellogoodbye/731008/