http://slow.writerscafe.org/OpalAuthor14 The original writings of author Kawiria J.C. en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776043697 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Here's the first chapter, final draft, of Over the Rainbow. After reading it, please be brutally honest about your thoughts on it. Spare me no mercy! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/OpalAuthor14/2008144/ This is a little poem I wrote earlier last year, in the middle of the night. I found it in my old notebook and thought it was fairly good for the sleep-deprived state I was in. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/OpalAuthor14/2007516/ Red, an orphan getting her nickname from a terrible incident, meets Alexander, a stray who claims to be from outside the town's Great Wall. Red escapes with him to find the truth about herself. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/OpalAuthor14/2007514/