http://slow.writerscafe.org/swl1019 The original writings of author Florizel en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776551560 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 I wrote this early in 2008, when I took a class called Writing Fiction at UNH. I was 21. Looking at it now, there's a lot I'd do differently, though not really with the dialogue. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/swl1019/743860/