http://slow.writerscafe.org/HomeUse The original writings of author Lillian en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776015450 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 I wanted to develop my other story a bit more. They're based off of the same idea, but are two different stories entirely. I plan on continuing this one, but it's still early bits of my writing. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/HomeUse/2093803/ A short story I felt I wanted to share. I wrote in a basic text editor, so it's likely full of typos! Please, I'm new to writing so please feel free to critique me, and don't pull any punches! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/HomeUse/2091771/