http://slow.writerscafe.org/divine89 The original writings of author Divine89 en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776011454 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is not really a poem. I have two unrelated sentences I have been trying to perfect and would like someone else's eyes. Any feedback on what works and what doesn't is appreciated. Thanks! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/divine89/2465606/