http://slow.writerscafe.org/Thrax The original writings of author Thrax en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776107232 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 I've been working on critique circle and tried branching out here's hoping I did it right I wrote a first person story this is an opening chapter I want to see if I give enough information or too much http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Thrax/2777799/ A collection of chapters told from a single characters point of view written in first person with the main character receiving the first and the most number of chapters overall at the end they combine http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Thrax/2777592/