http://slow.writerscafe.org/thirdeye The original writings of author Redboy en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775995397 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 *The story and orgin of our (collective willful) ignorance*why do we *automatically down vote or dismiss a logical argument....simply because it came from the other side?why don't people ever admit when they're wrong??Hey everybody. This is a rough draft of a video essay I am working on. I'm in.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/2812047/ There's a plot a foot...   To murder me  To rob me of everything I've held dear, strip me of all possession, and then...take my life     I am terrified My heart is pounding My mind is racing My hands are quivering in anticipation  I know they'll soon be here&n.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/2054799/  I mainly need feedback on how to improve it. Thank you *INTRO SCREEN CARD*In society we're always struggling to find the truth. It's hard to finger but we keep trying. We Stay content with the little threads of truth on life our movies, books, poems, netflix shows etc can strand together. Glea.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/2047543/ This is a short segment in a a script im writting for a video essay i plan to post on youtube. I'ts gonna be about why people love starwars so much http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1991002/ An earth shaking rumble comes from outside the throne room, as dark siede sits with his hands folded covering half his face, stewing in anticipation. Screams of agony can be faintly heard coming from outside. The fourth rumble shakes a piece of the rock ceiling loose and it falls a few inches from d.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1913096/ This is a script for a youtube video about star wars im putting on youtube. Please tell me what you think so far : ) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1909737/ Hey guys making a commentary/clip video on youtube that finally answers the question "why do people love starwars/why are the original 3 loved so much for so long". This is 1/3rd  of the script and an extremely rough draft. Tell me what you think ok? Just to let u know some paragraphs are makin.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1889636/ HELP ME OUT LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, BY RANKING (WHAT IN YOUR PERSONAL OPINION) IS THE BEST LOGO FROM YOUR FAVORITE TO YOUR LEAST FAVORITE. AM WILLING TO REVIEW WRITINGS FOR THIS FAVOR. THANK YOU GUYS ; ) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1869398/ She awakens on thecold hard floor to find that something feels different. She can feel theconcrete at her back, the harsh coldness of the air brushing her skin, and astrange mixture of warmth in the air as well, but the usual request to raiseher head goes unanswered. She can't move. Not even.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1420965/ A roar of cheering and laughter erupts as he walks off the stage, and away from one of the most powerful speeches his university had ever heard. The smartest student who in history grace the hall the most well known school in the country,  . While majoring in science he had come up with a theor.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1354234/ Note: The repeated lines are from a separate character.Only one left  to stop as i approach the completion of my lifes purpose.Only one left to stop me as i approach the completion of my lifes purpose. A purpose that started with a question, thee question...what am i? Am i just ...machine?.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1344939/ (This is actually an article not story) warning languageOk, just finished watching the finale of "how i met your mother", and after surfing the internet (twitter, blogs, facebook, porn site) for peoples reactions, i've learned three things..1 - Everybody (including me) HATED the finale (okay i lie.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1336997/ (even  with all his corrupted seeds leading him to "blasphemous actions", he's  still in the same seat as you,the driven not the driving)    Only one left  to stop as i approach the completion of my lifes purpose.Only one left to stop me as i approach the compl.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1322699/ “I’m just a quantum physicist, I don’t need this s**t.” I murmur under my breath, applying pressure to a gunshot wound in my right shoulder, Jittery and sweating like hell. “Good, good, just punctured the .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1302236/ Sayings are weird. You get their meaning but only from context. They are very ill constructed. It's like the guy that made them all forgot to add..."you know what the f**k i mean.." Every time i here one theres always this little voice in my head like "who makes this s**t up" .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1288507/ It's funny how different regions have different delusions. ( this reveals how unimportant these things really are in reality? One mans ho Is another mans housewife, one mans taboo Is another mans etc..) Like if ur born over here in America you dont feel cool unless you you party, do drugs, ... In ja.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1281980/ How does a storm know to ruin your picnic?Could one sense -with absolute certainty- what your are sensing?Your wants, your weaknesses, your troubles, your needs?Your current focus of thought??Can one feel what you are now touching?Can one taste what you have tasted?Hear the sounds your ears mind per.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1167620/ When my music is born, something in me is simply awaresomething in me is aware i've lost my freedomsomething in me is aware i'm trapped, controlled by by this body of sound...COMPELLEDlip syncing to a song, which has no wordssomething in me is beside myself...aware that i am exhausted something in m.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1161201/ "Tom boy," "tommy gun", "uncle tom"," peeping tom"..............................WHY IS TOM ALWAYS A B*****D?? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1158343/ ever since hurricane sandy i've had to start riding the bus again, so...yeah. I HATE RIDIN THE BUSIN NY. THE BUS SUCKS BALLS.  ME - THINK - BUS - NO - GOOD. Not trynna be mean but...it has to be said. T.V. was right. I swear, i never thought the word "s**t"  would ever become such a .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1152451/ So I'm sitting at the crib puzzled, and depressed. Thinkin'bout the road my species is headed down, with the confusion and , thewars, the ignorance, and you know…SATAN, etc... When I remembered vaguely whatsociety taught me…”N***A, ‘think??’  Youshoul.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1148041/ “I’m just a quantum physicist, I don’t need this s**t.” Isay under my breath, applying pressure to a gunshot wound in my right shoulder.Jittery and sweating like hell. “Good, good, just wounded flesh.” I look up and to the ceiling and say…"I've fail.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1129807/ you think maybe the government invented the "cooties game"??you know...that game you played as a child that everyone treated real, where one person would get infected by the imaginary, but somehow terrifying disease called "the cooties." And anybody that had the nerve to touch, come near, or even as.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1120100/ Why do ALL people in photos from the 1800s look like serial killers? (no seriously...GOOGLE THAT S**T) No matter what age, sex,  gender, or nationality, they all look... RAPEY. Even the babies. The 18th century baby girls look like killer c***s in training. Like they got a serial killer scholar.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1111786/ The words "you are thee only REAL thing ...in my life" ricochets through his mind...He stares blankly out the window. It's pouring. He bows his head, exhaling deeply. His hand wavers as he pulls a note out of his back pocket. He tries to ignore his eyes attraction to the needle scars on his arm, as .. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1105451/ A life for a life http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1069615/ In case you didn't know ('cause you couldn't have) I'm a schizophrenic. And as one, it's Usually hard to do all that a regular person does (keep a relationship thriving, or a job, etc...) Having schizophrenia, with such wonderful symptoms as consistent involuntary brain farts (it's like w.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1034918/ The average dumb dumbs subconscious acceptance of gradual rape goes as follows... Dumb dumb: "ahh, finally home. let me go on the internet and watch that new batman trailer"...(walks over to computer chair, sits down, and clicks video)Dumb dumb: "WFT!! Commercials!!!? WTH ARE COMMERCIALS DOING ON TH.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/1010520/ You know that thing where a friend does or says something completely cliche and/or fashionable, that is clearly a behavior or line they absorbed from TV/society? Or maybe from someone else (mother, father, friend, teacher, etc) who absorbed it from TV/society (or from someone else who...etc) and the.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/998323/ THIS IS PRETTY LONG SO...BARE WITH (or go to "SKIP" down below)so ...why do men cheat? hmm... CAUSE WE LOVE P***Y!!!! ( lol just playing (no i'm not) ) let's FINALLY put it to bed..In all seriousness, i didn't wanna treat this like a "SERIOUS" subject, and write a bible, but the world already has..... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/997628/ If god created all of this....then what created god???? I mean did some other "higher being" create the god that createdthis universe? And if so what created him? Yet another higher being? Are therea long line of higher beings going back to one original higher being? In thatcase, who c.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/995276/ In this society they constantly remind us of our differences toseparate us.  Whether it's race, gender,class, size, appearance, country, state, city, intelligence, social status,religion, jobs, age, generation, weight...right down to your favorite sportsteam! So i thought i'd take the t.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/992981/ Life is a lieevery wordevery friendevery smell every touchevery sound, taste, sight...a fading memory, an illusion from the startevery means to understand or disprove this...DELUSIONlife is pain, life is death every tight inhale a subtle, yet painful grasp for lifea deep, desperate breath in thinned.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/992961/ As a kid i was always confused by society's wording. Forexample, they call it "happy" birthday before it even starts, andregardless of whether it was actually "happy". They call alcoholism a"disease” when it’s clearly an addiction. “Social skills” is another one.It co.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/991827/ when your young they tell you your not whole/happy, and youneed to buy/do this/that to be happy. you don’t exist unless you see yourselfin, or buy these things. Unless you have these certain boxes of perception  that symbolize yourself. Usually things that areoutside of you and cons.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/990854/ this is the first part to a short story im writing (my first). http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/987624/ REMEMBER THIS THEME SONG? lol this is something i wrote when i was 16 so i guess...enjoy?? x D http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/936928/ this is a (very,very) rough draft of the opening dialog from the main character of a screen play i am currently working on called affinity. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/thirdeye/846229/