Broken

Torn. Gone. Shattered.

You are broken like the mirror you smashed.

Like the heart you broke.

Mine.

But unlike my heart and mirror, you cannot be fixed.

You are broken, shattered.

Forever hurt.

Like the mirror, you reflect you.

Gone.

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

I'm sorry to see that you felt this way... :(
The broken hearts throughout the world are increased by 100 each day. So many girls/boys are getting their hearts broken by people they love. It's a life lesson that we have to learn from. Getting over one opstacle is easy than getting over a hundred. I too have been heart broken thousands of times, you aren't alone.

The poem was a beautiful piece of poetry, even if you are eleven. You have an extravagant talent :)

~Lizzard~

[nono]

Eh, Everyone breaks they break down or they don't wanna be apart of the agony anymore. Either way it's your choice what you wanna do. Sit there with a broken heart or get up and fix it. Nice job!

[AileB.]

Perfecttt

[Jae]

*two thumbs up*

~Rem