The Girl Who Said No

"No."

She said, one word.

"No."

Fury rose, her father's face red.

His fury came out, in his fist.

But she still said "No."

Her mother ordered her around as if she was nothing.

Then, she said, "No."

A bruise appeared on her cheek.

But she still said, "No."

One little word. 

One little power.

The man knelt down on one knee.

He pulled out a box.

And she changed her "No" to a

"Yes."

Reviews

[Vanesa Markovic]

I'm glad for the end, and her yes!
Very moving!

[nono]

Deep, and sad, until you get to the end. This is very cute. I like it.

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seriously deep...love it

[momo]

you can do so much more with this. short and sweet yes but i feel theres so much more to this story

[Charles]

Strength againt the storm. Nice read.

[{K}]

A random little thing.