Breaths. [Part One]

 

Bring to me

Every breath you

Need in order to live;

Join these miracles

Along the edges of

My heart-shaped box

Inside a secret place

No one else can reach.

Author's Note

Let me know your every thought?

please check out the other parts.

Reviews

[Riverdance]

Interesting write.

Thanks for entering in the Move Me contest!

~Rd

[Spat Queen]

I like how you took the heart-shaped box and owned it. This is a really beautiful piece.

[Ari]

I really love the first two lines of this.

[Mysty Rayn]

Touched my heart. Precious.