Torrid

just trying to keep myself creative. getting back into the writing thing.

Hey there Lovely,

standing at the door,

are you coming in,

or are you going to burn out there.

the sun's too intense

and the air's too warm.

but then again,

how different will it be in here?

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Neat little poem
Torrid as is the day
But will she ?
She may.
Love it.
----- John

[Wolfwind Words]

This is cute. The allusion is felt and the image is clear. Great Ink!

Wolfie