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The Pieces of Me
A poem for people that have lost a father wrote this for my loving wife who lost her father recently
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a Trojan Horse
Reviewed by Chris Shaw
17 Minutes Ago
How sad that poetry has become infected by machinery. It’s a disease. Everything I have written is a legacy for my grandchildren and their children. When I am a memory I hope they will recognize.. more..
Realiti questions
Reviewed by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
9 Hours Ago
I go to mall eateries rarely when I do it’s maybe twice a year as I hate crowds noise and clatter
Anyway I relate to this as last time I went I sat at a window in sun overlooking the cou.. more..
I Need a Knife
Reviewed by Ilanna
10 Hours Ago
This poem so beautifully depicts feelings of self hatred. There are parts of myself, attitudes I see showing up more frequently that I very much dislike. I can be bitchy, catty, and mean- and in the m.. more..
He looks down
Reviewed by Michael Sun Bear
2 Hours Ago
I live in a Christian retirement community where I belong to a writing group, and as expected, many write only of scripture and their faith. I love that you are confident enough in your own faith tha.. more..
A Fictional Life
Reviewed by Chris Shaw
58 Minutes Ago
Little white lies. I think lots of people use them as they don’t wish to hurt with brutal honesty. If my family ask, how are you I’m not going to upset their day by telling them I feel lik.. more..
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