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The Pieces of Me
A poem for people that have lost a father wrote this for my loving wife who lost her father recently
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Recent Reviews
a Trojan Horse
Reviewed by Chris Shaw
19 Minutes Ago
How sad that poetry has become infected by machinery. It’s a disease. Everything I have written is a legacy for my grandchildren and their children. When I am a memory I hope they will recognize.. more..
He looks down
Reviewed by Michael Sun Bear
2 Hours Ago
I live in a Christian retirement community where I belong to a writing group, and as expected, many write only of scripture and their faith. I love that you are confident enough in your own faith tha.. more..
Unraveling
Reviewed by Lorry
8 Hours Ago
This one stumped me for a while because I couldn't make up my mind if the unravelling was of the mind or of the heart. But after rereading and pondering I finally figured out that just like reality, t.. more..
Saved
Reviewed by Michael Sun Bear
2 Hours Ago
I really like this, like how you expand the world being described with each line, going from the lamplight and implied bed, to the roof with the sound of rain then out into the distance with the sound.. more..
He looks down
Reviewed by Ilanna
10 Hours Ago
This poem was so interesting! I especially liked the line "His father was full of nice kind surprises". I am not a religious person, I wasn't raised to be so. There is so much about the bible and such.. more..
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