Popular Writing
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The Pieces of Me
A poem for people that have lost a father wrote this for my loving wife who lost her father recently
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Recent Reviews
I will await your return
Reviewed by Michael Sun Bear
6 Hours Ago
So sorry you feel that way. I AM old (read your profile) and I did not expect to be alone at this point in life. I deal with much loneliness and my mood can get quite black. My muse comes and goes... more..
A Fictional Life
Reviewed by Chris Shaw
58 Minutes Ago
Little white lies. I think lots of people use them as they don’t wish to hurt with brutal honesty. If my family ask, how are you I’m not going to upset their day by telling them I feel lik.. more..
Unraveling
Reviewed by Lorry
8 Hours Ago
This one stumped me for a while because I couldn't make up my mind if the unravelling was of the mind or of the heart. But after rereading and pondering I finally figured out that just like reality, t.. more..
GIVE A
Reviewed by Davidgeo
3 Hours Ago
I think you should learn how to play the piano. I totally attribute the abusive childhood relationship I had with the piano to my ghetto a*s amateur poetry skills. You should get high and listen to .. more..
a Trojan Horse
Reviewed by Chris Shaw
18 Minutes Ago
How sad that poetry has become infected by machinery. It’s a disease. Everything I have written is a legacy for my grandchildren and their children. When I am a memory I hope they will recognize.. more..
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