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The Pieces of Me
A poem for people that have lost a father wrote this for my loving wife who lost her father recently
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GIVE A
Reviewed by Davidgeo
3 Hours Ago
I think you should learn how to play the piano. I totally attribute the abusive childhood relationship I had with the piano to my ghetto a*s amateur poetry skills. You should get high and listen to .. more..
Saved
Reviewed by Michael Sun Bear
2 Hours Ago
I really like this, like how you expand the world being described with each line, going from the lamplight and implied bed, to the roof with the sound of rain then out into the distance with the sound.. more..
a Trojan Horse
Reviewed by Chris Shaw
20 Minutes Ago
How sad that poetry has become infected by machinery. It’s a disease. Everything I have written is a legacy for my grandchildren and their children. When I am a memory I hope they will recognize.. more..
I will await your return
Reviewed by Michael Sun Bear
6 Hours Ago
So sorry you feel that way. I AM old (read your profile) and I did not expect to be alone at this point in life. I deal with much loneliness and my mood can get quite black. My muse comes and goes... more..
Unraveling
Reviewed by Lorry
8 Hours Ago
This one stumped me for a while because I couldn't make up my mind if the unravelling was of the mind or of the heart. But after rereading and pondering I finally figured out that just like reality, t.. more..
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