loved

when someone loves me

                                 Loved

                 I want to lay next to him,

                 I love all his hugs and kisses,

                 I love how he makes me laugh,

                   and feel about myself.

                 I want to be n his arms right now,

                 I love someone,

                 I love him with all my heart and 

                   mind.

Reviews

[Shiningwolf]

This makes me miss my boyfriend :( Very nice a good way to express your emotions is through poetry sometimes!

[Jim]

Good poem. Very frank and honest. By the way, in the first line, "lay" should be "lie."

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem of love. To be loved and be able to give the gift back are the moments we need. Each line made the story stronger in your words. A excellent poem of love.
Coyote