Red

A poem during a nature walk

A cardinal

sings his sad song

in the bleak bare winter

crying out to the other birds

no one answers

all alone

the beautiful red bird.

Reviews

[Tsukin Archangel]

well that's beautiful but sad, poor birdie all alone with no one to warm its nest in the winter D:

[Mia]

Beauty outside is enough to attract people but you need beauty inside to keep them there! Feels like a sad song to me…lonely is most difficult especially when surround by people! Lovely write Slayer!

[KeeD]

Short sweet and simple.. yet effective. I felt the loneliness after the sweet song.

[The Slayer]

Thanks. I was felling lonely while I wrote it