Falling

This is a poem about Love ... about a burning desire to become lost in your lover ...

I am falling ... falling ...
into the cavern of your eyes.
so big, so brown, so loving,
they are calling to me,
speaking silent words into my soul.
& I become powerless,
my heart cannot turn away.
I have only one desire now,
to lose myself comepletly,
into the essence of you.
to become devoured,

by your loving kisses.

Author's Note

This is one of my most recent poems, I hope you all enjoy it.
Any feedback, tips or hints will be taken into consideration.

Reviews

[M.D Leon]

simple, short, and sweet. if there is any criticism it would be that perhaps the end doesn't flow as well as the beginning, then again the beginning is quite impressive.

[Revery]

Oh, yup, you have the magic touch. Your words are beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work.