One Man - Daddy

A short rhyme I wrote inspired by the soldier's in Afghanistan.

One man, two man, three man, down,

Men in armour roll in the town,

Flashing lights and the sound of drums,

I’ll protect Baby from the guns.

 

Four men, five men, six men, Out

Hear them all cheer and shout,

Kiss our mamma and sing goodnight,

Daddy is our shining light.

 

Author's Note

Just something I wrote for a contest in about 2 minutes

Reviews

[Steve]

Well done for 2 minutes? wow. you are good at organizing a write to have it make sense and come together. And you are actually writing poetry! Too many here just seem to be writing stuff that isnt even poetry!