Fear

Somewhere in the dark

those eyes are staring me

My eyes getting smaller

those eyes are increasing

My loud cry dying in me

My helpless heart pounding louder

Rainfall and thunderclap

Trembling leg and hand

Those eyes are red and scary

Slowly coming towards me

Two hands raised towards me

Suddenly water splashed on my face

It is already morning

I am late

Author's Note

Awaiting your comments

Reviews

[Derekv]

Excellent poem. Very vivid description of a nightmare, and the imagery grows slowly more unsettling as it progresses.

Keep up the great work!

-Derekv

[Amit]

Thanks for your review...

[jesserose99]

I love how the mind is playing with you here, and reality steps in at the last minute. The only thing that doesn't quite fit is the 'slowing coming towards me', should probably be 'slowly coming towards me.

I like the dark undertones of this though. It speaks of a slight paranoia to me.

Nice movement!
Nice

[Amit]

Thank you for your review I just got the mistake I have done, thanks again for that.