different shades of grey

There's different shades of grey. a grave is were they lay. they tried the finish the foolish man, but he got away. kill or be killed. that's my moto for today. this isn't who i am. it's what you've made. sing a song to the dead. dance in the rain. take a rocket  outer space. you feel a bullet. but not the pain. your at the coffin. you cry because of shame. you've meet a girl, but neglect to learn her name. now she's dead, and your the one to blame. sing a song of glory. my vision please restore me. you can pretend, but you don't know me. you fake little phony. my feelings aren't showing, sorry please ignore me. the grass of life i'm mowing. the shadow walls are caving in. on this crazy day we are living in. and your the one to blame.     

Reviews

[jamal]

Good ryhmes and flow to this poem


Good job keep it up

[Jeremia]

I thought this piece had nice flow and good rhyme. It was a pretty nice read.

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Amazing! The emotions you put into this are incredible from sad to hate to shame and regret to just flat out misery, perfect play with your words Jose. Well done sir, well done.

[Empty Spaces]

thanks! :)

[Phillitup]

" and your the one to blame."

This is chilling. Regret and remorse fill this poem of sadness and hate.

[Siren]

This. Is. Spectacular! Definitely a personal favorite! There's a lot of insight in this. Lots of observations about society. Great, great job, extremely well done, and much fanfare and applause. LOVED THIS!

[Empty Spaces]

really? i didden't think many people would enjoy this one but thanks :)

[Siren]

never doubt your power with words (:

[Empty Spaces]

lol ill agree to that