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tanka -- free form

                                   weekends        sunshine on

                                   saturday morning and foggy

                                   mist in sunday's eyes

                                   daiquiris in the shade and

                              the night stained with wine

                                               weekends

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. Not entirely unique, either, but I like the lazy way of describing things that you've used in this and there's some nice imagery as well. Good work.

[annie lee]

well, is anything really unique? thanks for your time.